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【1】把 I am 删了吧， [我的心] 用my heart就OK啊，好春知加 [我是 - I am]进去没意思啊。 【2】tremendous巨大的- 是森州形容词，不能在它後面加of She is a tall girl. 你不会说 She is a tall of girl. He is a fat man. 你也不友消会说 He is a fat of man. 应该加个名词在tremendous後面: by a tremendous [amount] of fame - 很多荣誉这个amount是数量的意思: small amount of money-很少钱 (钱数量少)large amount of time - 很多时间 【3】完成品: My heart is dominated by a tremendous amount of fame.
