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The latest issue of the "Times” magazine complimented the diplomatic image of Peng, she was viewed as the image of Chinese first lady.Also, it published an article on its website earlier , which has drown the attention of Peng’s diplomatic trip. According to this article, Peng ’s visiting has promoted the national image and soft power of China.我稍微修改了一下，我认为你应该想讲times magazine，然后有一些词显得多余而不通顺，最后有几个词凳告我建议你改一改，第一个是issue，我颤岩认为如果是杂志上报道的话，不应该用issue，这个词带有一点点negative的意思，所以你可以按照你想说的，再改改，还有茄粗御就是the soft power of China，这个我大明白你的意思。我在国外长大，所以英文的话，我会改的比较口语化而且顺口一些，不知道你觉得如何。希望能够帮助你。
